ok me starting prolog to my chars GU YU and Nara

[BigSasuke]

Here it goes i made Reitos Nara Gu and Yu first i just got to ask do u mind about this zambar
well im gonna start any way just tell me if u want me to stop


Nara: "Why do i have to be on a team with Gu and Yu!"
Teacher: "because thats how u guys were paired up live with it"
Nara: "Fine sir"
Teacher: " Now for your team leader raise ure hand please"
Yu: "i vote for Nara"
Gu: " what why not me"
Yu: "because Nara is stronger"
Gu: "sure"
Nara: "Oh yeah im leader now were off to train"
Teacher: "Nara not so fast you got to be tested if u can pass to be a genin"
Nara: "WHAT!!"
Gu: "idiot i even new that"
Yu: "well i didn't im more of a idiot"
Gu: " hahha u called ure self a idiot loser"
Nara: "Teacher so what do we got to do"
Teacher " you have to...
TO BE CONTINUED

[BigSasuke]

please tell me what u thought and what u liked and dis liked please it would be nice
no one has looked at this yet

[Itachi_Uchiha]

...............it goes way against the rules for genin and academy and stuff.........

[BigSasuke]

but itachi this is ficition and if u read reito is sorta does fit cuse its fiction and i havent even told u what village there from

[BigSasuke]

...............it goes way against the rules for genin and academy and stuff.........
there not genin yet they need to take a test

[BigSasuke]

well i mean a team leader like errr nvm i just got to do it to fit into the prolog see its just i got to use what ive read so far
and i think im gonna make em leader just for this test then they get a jonin if u want to make that for me u can itachi just pm me the stuff

[Itachi_Uchiha]

ok but by the ranks of shinobi a genin cannot lead his team a jonin must be in charge of a team of genin.......and under some cir****tances i believe a chuunin has the ability to watch over a genin team as well

[BigSasuke]

ok itachi what ever u say but this is just for test

[BigSasuke]

here we go
teacher: u guys got to take a test
nara: wha!
Yu: ohno
GU: yes
teacher: team 1 will be fighting team 3 hmmm
nara: this battles ares
Gu: dont be full of ure self
Nara: why not
a fight breaks out and depletes both of there chakra
Gu: ugh what was that for
nara: for u being stupid
Gu: wha!
3 years later once they have become chunin...

[zambar: Red Sky hokage]

ok but by the ranks of shinobi a genin cannot lead his team a jonin must be in charge of a team of genin.......and under some cir****tances i believe a chuunin has the ability to watch over a genin team as well
Itachi, what he's probably meaning to write is that the leader is just a majority vote on who is the best of the team. Not a group that the ninja is assigned to. Plus, if a ninja is assigned to a group, that means there will be a total of 4 ninja in the same group.
By the way BigSasuke, nice fanfic!

[BigSasuke]

Jonin: chunin a large sound attack force is comeing and is going to destroy us
Nara: and u want us to stop em
Jonin: yep
Gu: what fun
Jonin: hahaha
3 minuts later in the mist of battle
Nara: ugh falls on ground dead
Yu: no nara
Gu: dang why did he have to die already
Yu: ill take him to the hospital
Gu:fine
gu activates his power x10 jutsu and clobers 10 ninja
Gu: take that
Gu: and that
smashes a ninjas fase
Yu: i must leave u now Gu
Gu: were in a battle
Yu: ive been called for special training
Gu: at a time like this
Yu: its important
Gu: i gusse its time for 100x arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgggggggggggggg
gu grows 10x his size
Gu: bring it on
gu takes down 20 ninjas in a blink of the eye
Gu: i win again
>>>: SUPRISE
boldurs fall on Gu
Gu: hmp rock ninja pics up the rocks and throws them at them
Now at the hospital
Nurse: hmm the bodys dead and cold
Naras body: disingrates
Nurse: hmmm he was hurt horbly...
???: so uve come to train havent you

to be continued
plz coment on it

[Sharingan Warrior]

why GU&YU thoise names are like wierd please change uh.

[BigSasuke]

i like em sorry if GOU is better i might ok i think im gonna write a new chapter tomrroy